waiting for you

It was the last rains..as it poured down wetting the leaves, the raindrops find this beautiful young leaf among others.. but it's time to say goodbye! :( 
The leaf waits eagerly to meet her beloved when cycle of season brings him back, this time she is just not as young! ;)

Leaf Eye by Darin69
PC: http://darin69.deviantart.com/art/Leaf-Eye-108509732

last mystical rain
fondly pecking the young leaves
romance slowly buds

clouds descend mountain
silent valley with hush leaves
air carries monks’ chants

like the pale river
waits to glow with summer breeze
she yearned for his kiss

when its snow, she’s grown,
hear the sparrows’ sing love songs
she gazes at blue sky

The task was to use the highlighted words, without breaking the order, each in a line and writing haiku (s). 


  1. I like the way you have made an entire story of these haiku. Well done !

    1. Thank you :) now it sounds more like a poem with 5-7-5 syllable stanzas, I hope the haiku feel isn't lost :) :D

  2. A lovely full circle!


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