Finding peace

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Squalls of wrecked emotions
and tears
fight within for calm;
no fear -
to stop the storm of solitude;
sojourn in abode of peace.
Wandering through rough cold path,
no more depression and wrath.
Mind - - nude;
finding abode of peace.

In response to photo challenge#168 at MLMM and Quadrille#34 at dVerse poets pub

Comments

  1. peace and love....i liked "mind--nude"!

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  2. Yes, "to stop the storm of solitude"...that's what we wrestle with, isn't it? Love how the emotion calms.

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  3. "Mind - nude...". Yes, that's it, isn't it. To lay our minds bare to find peace. Well done!

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  4. Stop the storm of solitude.... So hard for so many in this day and age. I also feel the poetic voice's desire to strip the mind bare. Well done!

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  5. I liked the idea of solitude being a kind of storm when one doesn't want that solitude.

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    1. Exactly what I was going through when I wrote this...

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    2. Exactly what I was going through when I wrote this...

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  6. I love the internal rhyme and rhythm of this.

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  7. Love the balance between the quiet and the stormy.

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  8. Lovely response, well written..

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