Anonymous birthday wish

This one's specially for the hostess Sanaa, as she celebrates her Birthday week!! The prompt at "A dash of sunny" this week is "Round hour of dawning blush, come blow me a wish- Birthday Special"


The roads and gates; and the two-lands fate
more are things that keep us far;
but when we gaze high; at the vast sky
both of us - see the same stars!
The flowing wind sees no course - 
could have touched past me and come to you!
So here my friend, who is miles away
I send you wishes that will sway
to you through mild, caressing whispers;
in the evening sky, lit by the winking stars -
When you feel a special touch,
that’s my friend, all the luck,
the love and warmth I have sent - 
With the nature’s messengers

Comments

  1. Sreeja16 December 2016 at 15:41

    Beautiful. ...!!

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  2. Sanaa Rizvi16 December 2016 at 18:10

    Awww!!❤️💖This is so wonderfully eloquent and heart-warming, Vijita😍 I am so touched by your tender and loving words gosh especially love "I send you wishes that will sway
    to you through mild, caressing whispers; in the evening sky, lit by the winking stars" sigh you seriously made my day😍 Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support❤️💖


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  3. Old Egg17 December 2016 at 04:45

    What a great birthday poem so beautifully constructed that read so well. Well done Vijita.

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