Learning from Experience
This week at Imaginary garden with real toads, poets frame queries in "Fashion me a poem", using not more than 100 words, in the style of Emily Dickinson's 'Answer July' Here's one on the dilemma on which is the best phase of life - past, present or future: PC: www.google.co.in Answer tomorrow - What do you hold - Where lies my smile - Which way to memory? Sighed tomorrow - Are you bold - Can you laugh every while - Yester is remembrance already! I am gone - said yesterday - What did I teach - Where is the dream - Do you wish to deem - What is it today? Frowns today – Is past the leisure I had – Is future good or bad – How many more of me(s) to add? Exclaimed – life explained – Beautiful was yester – Upcoming not to pester – Today a daily fad! Live everyday – taught experience PC: www.google.co.in
NIce juxtaposition of rain and tears.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ma'm :)
DeleteThere is something about rain that loosens the sadness in the soul.
ReplyDeleteExacty, I feel the same about rains :)
DeleteBeautiful. ...liked the effect brought out by rain...tears...thoughts...nice!
ReplyDeletehey, thanks!!
DeleteI love the idea of rain letting out sadness.. sigh.. beautiful!
ReplyDeletei love that combination... infact rain goes equally well with sadness and romance, isn't it :)
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