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The mystical vast universe beholds
certainty of enigmatic life and beyond.
Unfolds the tale of cosmic supremacy
woven together to manifest destiny.
Aether for shelter, water for living,
fire for power and air for being.
Strength and harmony bestowed by land
Humans on it, composed of grains of sand.
Undoubtedly then, when the sparkle’s gone,
He’s returned to the sand all alone.



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In response to "Midweek Motif- A grain of sand", hosted by Sumana Roy.

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  1. indybev27 April 2017 at 19:05

    "The powerful play goes on, and you may contribute a verse..." ~ Walt Whitman

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  2. Susan27 April 2017 at 19:20

    Hello, Vijita! I enjoyed seeing these little grains of sand as part of the vastness and certainty. There will be sparkle and there will be unity: dust to dust, sand to sand.

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  3. Myrna R.27 April 2017 at 20:00

    Beautiful write! Can't help but see ouselves as grains of sand, alone in this vastness.

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    1. Dr. Vijita Pillai28 April 2017 at 00:00

      Thank you :)
      your comment has rather summarized well my thought... :D

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  4. Sanaa Rizvi28 April 2017 at 03:38

    This is incredibly deep! Love your response to the prompt ❤️

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  5. Rosemary Nissen-Wade28 April 2017 at 03:54

    An interesting take on the prompt.

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  6. Sherry Blue Sky28 April 2017 at 05:23

    From cosmic dust to earth-dust....an amazing journey.

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  7. Gillena Cox28 April 2017 at 18:09

    "all alone"
    ends on a poignant note

    much love...

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  8. Panchali28 April 2017 at 23:11

    That completes the cycle, Vijita! Very interesting take on the prompt....wow!

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