Rain of thoughts



Body drenching in the rain; mind in past thoughts, painted in moistened eyes

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  1. Rosemary Nissen-Wade17 April 2017 at 12:59

    NIce juxtaposition of rain and tears.

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  2. Kerry O'Connor17 April 2017 at 15:38

    There is something about rain that loosens the sadness in the soul.

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  3. Sreeja17 April 2017 at 16:29

    Beautiful. ...liked the effect brought out by rain...tears...thoughts...nice!

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  4. Sanaa Rizvi17 April 2017 at 20:34

    I love the idea of rain letting out sadness.. sigh.. beautiful!

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    1. Dr. Vijita Pillai20 April 2017 at 10:53

      i love that combination... infact rain goes equally well with sadness and romance, isn't it :)

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