Learning from Experience
This week at Imaginary garden with real toads, poets frame queries in "Fashion me a poem", using not more than 100 words, in the style of Emily Dickinson's 'Answer July' Here's one on the dilemma on which is the best phase of life - past, present or future: PC: www.google.co.in Answer tomorrow - What do you hold - Where lies my smile - Which way to memory? Sighed tomorrow - Are you bold - Can you laugh every while - Yester is remembrance already! I am gone - said yesterday - What did I teach - Where is the dream - Do you wish to deem - What is it today? Frowns today – Is past the leisure I had – Is future good or bad – How many more of me(s) to add? Exclaimed – life explained – Beautiful was yester – Upcoming not to pester – Today a daily fad! Live everyday – taught experience PC: www.google.co.in
That's lovely - tracing the silent journey of a raindrop!
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Thanks Gillena :)
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DeleteA second read reveals more...like double meaning of "fall"
ReplyDeleteI meant the fall from the clouds to trees to the land... and further infact... seeping down and then the cycle continues :)
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ReplyDeleteA real beauty nice haiga Vijita
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